Judson Brandenburg
English 1109 at 1:30, Mon-Wed
October 11, 2020
Inmates
It was the summer of 2020
We wanted to go to the movies but didn’t have any money
All we had was each other till the end of the summer
It flew by like a kite in the sky
None of us wanted to say goodbye
Cause at the end of the day
They were my ride or die
“Always active”
“Always present”
We were so independent
Versatile in our nature
Not a care in the world until we meet our Maker
The summer of 2020
Went up and down like a rollercoaster
Nice poem, it cool that you got some of the lines to rhyme and the end was connect to the beginning when "the summer of 2020". I also feel that this is a poem that a lot of people can connect with.
ReplyDeleteNice poem! I like how you got it to rhyme in some parts. Also great use of metaphors.
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